They comment in this order: (I had the following descriptions saved in a text file on my computer for over a year imp not sure where I got it from or if its a mix of my writing plus someone else's, if someone notices this is something they wrote tell me and I will credit you.)
1. The Mayor: Based on how well the townspeople like you, he'll rate the opinion of the town of you. To get a good remark, become friends with everyone! Best Remark- "Yes, everybody trusts him."
2. The Midwife: The midwife will rate how well you get along with the ladies. For the best evaluation from her, get all 5 girls to have a pink heart. Best Remark- "He's very popular with the girls. They all have a crush on him."
3. The Potion Shop Owner: If you've done a good job of not getting sick too often, going to bed at a reasonable hour, and have gotten all of the power berries, he'll give you his best evaluation. Best Remark- "He is strong and healthy and very good about looking after himself."
4. Greg (The fisherman): Based on how much time you spend fishing, Greg will rate how well you relax. Just go fishing occasionally and you should be fine. If you think you haven't been doing enough fishing, spend the week before the evaluation at the fishing spot of your choice, but don't slack off in other areas. Best Remark- "He seems pretty laid back."
5. The Chief Carpenter : As long as you have every possible house extension as well as the greenhouse, you'll get his best rating. How easy! Best Remark- "His buildings are all perfect. I'm impressed he has achieved so much!"
6. Basil (The botanist): Basil rates the size of your fields of grass. Why? I don't know.. just nod and smile. And make sure you have lots of grass planted. I mean *lots*. Try about 24+ full squares. Never can be too careful. Best Remark- "His grass fields are all excellent! Yeah, I'd like to give him a Green Master award."
7. Special Gourmet Judge : Depending on how many recipes you collect, this guy rates you accordingly. Collect all 35 to get the best rating. Best Remark- "His recipe notebook is fabulous. I'd like to give him the "Recipe Master" award."
8. The Buyer: He rates how much you've shipped. No matter what I do he is never happy. Best(?) Remark- "I really want him to ship more stuff!"
9. The Green Ranch Owner : Based on how many animals you have, as well as how well you take care of them, the Green Ranch Owner will rate you. Make sure you never let any animal die, especially. Best Remark- "He's a guy who can talk from the heart with animals."
Now your father comes to your farm to talk to you. Make sure to put all of your animals out in the field the day before the evaluation, or else he'll tell you that it looks lonely. He'll ask you a few questions, just answer what you think he wants to hear, and he'll be happy. Tell him that working on a farm is hard work, but that it's worth it, and that you have lots of people you can count on. That kind of stuff.
Then your wife (and kid, if you have one) will come and greet him. If you have a log terrace, the townspeople that are very good friends with you will come to spend the evening with you. Depending on how many people show up, your father will either say "Is that all your friends?!" or "Wow, all of these people came for you?"
If not everyone is here then your wife or someone else will say not everyone is here but come this way father. You will then cut to a scene with you and your wife and your wife will ask if you understood your grandpas last words. Reply yes or no, your wife kisses you, credits roll. If you have a bad rating your father says your leaving and forces you to leave. You can continue the game if you get a good rating.